They came in crowds
tens of thousands marched
hands across the world
all united in peace
voicing slogans of, ‘ No War’.
Mothers pushing babes in prams
fathers carrying children on shoulders.
Yet, when bombs and missiles hit targets
Silence, deafening, screaming, Silence!
The day the united became the lost.
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A contest entry
- - What's Happening? - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 24, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold I - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended January 29, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Welcome Back!!
Thank You for sharing Your Words of Wisdom
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I'm Blessed to read Your verse again~
Honored to have You enter~
Many blessings to You in my contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes & judging will be done shortly
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Wonderful
Such a powerful write. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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Wow this is a scary
image you paint with this. I have often thought what would it be like if enough people made this kind of an effort for peace, but your probably right there would be someone somewhere there to ruin it all. good write
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: The Lost
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept being shown Burma- when the Monks marched and were beaten down- really sad situation also senseless the violence against the peaceful march~ Strong message You have brought to the surface- Also being given word: Israel-
hearing words: Help Me- and being shown a person trapped under debris from missile fire- child- it was like the child was playing in an abandoned building- being curious and it happened to have collapsed
Also being shown a banana- like fried banana- I'm being given~ words: Puerto Rican- also hearing phrase: Know Your roots...as if dig deeper- You will be amazed
Hopefully that makes some sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Silence, deafening, screaming, Silence!
The day the united became the lost.
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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intense. great write here full of imegery for such a short piece. Loved it. good luck in your contest.
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Amazing
Such a powerful piece this is! Worded perfectly to get the message out clear. The wishful thinking and the reality. Atruth among truths. Great job! Don
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