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Moon

With the moon by my side I can do anything.
The moons charm is like no other.
Forever it will be in the night sky.
Shining hope down on us all.
Never will I be lost in the dark again.
The moons light will always be there to guide me.
Forever being able to count on it.
Its my beacon, my pillar of hope.
Trust in it, it will never fail you.
With the moons lasting charm I will go far.
At night it embraces me like a lover would.
Keeps me safe and warm.
The moon is like no other.
Its beauty goes unmatched.

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  • peridotPixi
    June 27, 2008

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    i love the wonderful description of the beauty of the moon you have used in this wonderful poem, i love the embrace you have used, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • crazymomma
    June 19, 2008
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    I would like to claim the red rose

  • peridotPixi
    June 18, 2008
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    i like the crown and the notebook, thank you for the entry Have fun ~Amy