Can you hear me?
I can hear you
Your cries echo
Throughout the whole room.
Can you see me?
I can see you
Your tears glisten
Like the stars near the moon.
Can you feel me?
I can feel you
Your cold hands tremble
Throughout the winter noon.
Do you love me?
I love you
The bond we share between us
Is forever true.
Author notes
5. Although the world is full of suffering, it is full also of the overcoming of it.
A contest entry
- Options: Quotes and Picture Inspiration by Nicada.
600 points, ended June 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very compassionate piece
There is also a very innocent feel to it.
Good Luck!
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Nice job on relating to the prompt you chose. This write is full of love, hope and compassion. These are all qualities humanity could use more of. Thanks for entering and good luck. Patty
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INCREDIBLE!!
The form is perfect and the words so filled with substance that it brims with emotions. I will have to check out your page and read on!
BLESSINGS, Doris
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