Check in time
no need to sign
nurse undoes the shackles
but her new coat stays tightly fastened
“She is a crazy one”
says the driver
“heed my words
take no chances”
Poor little thing
never did a thing wrong
led down a hall of madness
her future is now gone
~vampy
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A powerful short piece (My Fav. and weakness) inspired by no doubt something even more powerful. You rock, your poetry and emotion shared is always like warmth in a cold room. I will not lie-but I will try to be here more..Your interaction would be like a battery charger,,,
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Glad you enjoyed it. It is a series piece. I started it while listening to the cd Gates of Delirium by Midnight Syndicate. I am taking each title and doing a poem to it. The music is awesome. Reminds most like scary movie music.
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This is certainly chilling and definitely dark. I liked the way you used brevity for effect, we don't always need hundreds of words to communicate feelings and to create art. Thanks for sharing, this was very well written and I liked it!
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with just a few words, they carried much impact. The picture adds a nice touch an endless doorway with no way out. Nicely done.
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Thank you, this is a new series piece. Nice of you to drop by!!!
vampy
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This is an intense little series, and intriguing to boot. Very well done as it is very hard to achieve such with such short little pieces...BRAVO!
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