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Hershey Kiss

A chocolate kiss upon my lips
Melts my heart away
Each and everyday
I can taste the feelings
of love with every bite
chocolate holds my key tonight
I have passion for the chocolate kiss
So dark and milky
Wonderful taste
With chocolate my lips are laced
Enjoying every bite
Chocolate is my weakness tonight

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  • peridotPixi
    June 27, 2008
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    i love it, lol


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 25, 2008

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    Lovely.. This poem really shows the love in Hershey Kisses. I like the way you described it. Very well written. My favorite part is when you said "I can taste the feelings of love with every bite" Wow i can taste the love in my skittles i eat . That was worded so well. Thanks for entering my contest. i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • azure85 gold member
    June 18, 2008
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    Peridot-my birthstone, I would like that charm please.


    • peridotPixi
      June 18, 2008
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      its yours, what day is your bday? mine is the 14th


      • azure85 gold member
        June 18, 2008
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        Mine is the 20th. I think it is a very pretty gemstone, always a lovely light green.

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