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Sun And Soul

I don't know where I am going
I don't know what I will find
Just knowing where I have been
All that I will leave behind

I see the sunshine up ahead
on that long and dusty road
hoping to find some peace of mind
to help this poor troubled soul

I can't tell where I have been
for that road is much to long
I just know that I need a hold
Once again to be more strong

Those sunbeams dance around me
as they lead me down the road
a smile glimpses through the pain
The sun and my soul is all I hold

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Photo credit to: Road to the Sun by Slava

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    July 2, 2008

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    very nice poem speaks from sadness but it also reads of hope and faith that one will persevere thank you for entering and good luck in the contest


  • maralisa silver member
    June 19, 2008
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    wow this is so wonderful somtimes we all dont know where we are going hoping to find some peace of mind
    to help this poor troubled soul I hope your soul finds its peace it is hard but true peace is within us all and the past does not eqaul the future hun take care I wish you encouragement to find happyness to
    good luck in the contest take care