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A Day’s Work










Gossamer threads,
knitting lamppost to
parked car,
catch only morning dew
and frenzied waving arms
of a commuter
dashing off to work.


The spider ascends
to carefully resume his weaving.

A contest entry

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  • Dalaney gold member
    July 4, 2008
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    thank you so very much for your entry. I truly enjoyed this write. Love, Lane


  • Mirthryl
    June 22, 2008

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    Enjoyable word choice, "gossamer threads, knitting lamppost." Love the "catch only morning dew and...waving arms." Being a spider is certainly a life calling for perpetual patience!