A reminiscence of you as I gaze into the clouded mirror;
We shared a squalid history and before me it breaks,
Shattering into a thousand splinters around my unclothed feet.
A contest entry
- Quickie:: Are you up for it? by Fallen Grace.
600 points, ended June 18, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow... I envy your talents when it comes to quickies! You made something so beautiful with so few words. well done! just splendid.
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clouded mirror sounds profound, congrats on the bronze, it is a nice poem, nice and short.
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Wow, this is beautifully written! I really like it, there's amazing imagery within and the emotion is deep.
Great job and good luck in the contest!
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Beautifully-Bound
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