I wrote your name on a paper
But by accident I threw it away
I wrote your name on my hand
But it got washed away
I wrote your name in the sand
But the waves came and took it away
I wrote your name in my heart
And there, forever it will stay
Is this poem any good?? I think its horrible, please tell me what I can do to make it better!? Thanks
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It's soo sad!!
:'(
not really,
anyway,
Great Poem!
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I think the last line should be:
And there, forever it will stay.
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yah that does sound better
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