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~*~ Butterfly kisses ~*~

Missing image
crystal tears ran down her cheeks
true love just out of reach

hope continues comforting her soul
for now she knows he must go

letting her know he's nearby
he sends her his love - a butterfly

caught on a warm spring whisper
his gossamar wings reach out to kiss her

A contest entry

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  • Topnotchsy
    June 24, 2008

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    Really pretty write. I can see why it won an honorable mention (must have been stiff competition or it could have placed higher in my opinion.)


    • onesugar gold member
      June 25, 2008
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      Thank you for reading and commenting
      valued and appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • ScarletO Greeters member
    June 21, 2008
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    Wonderful flow and rhyme and a true joy to read.

    • onesugar gold member
      June 22, 2008
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      Thank you for reading and commenting
      Truly appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    This is great in wow the butterfly is his message of love..very romantic and a tear jerker that I think is better than just honorable mention!
    Return the favor?

    • onesugar gold member
      June 20, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your lovely comment
      truly appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    Aw sad and sweet at the same time.
    Lovely are your words, softly written of lost love
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie

  • midnightblue1272
    June 19, 2008
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    Pretty

    Very pretty words, sis. A nice short story of sadness turned into hope. Fine work.


    • onesugar gold member
      June 20, 2008
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      Thanks bro

      It's not bad for 50 words

      Appreciate you reading as always

      ~sugar~


  • Xmjx
    June 19, 2008
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    Heart warming and affectionet words loved this anuty

    • onesugar gold member
      June 19, 2008
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      I thought you would. Thanks for reading MJ
      Always a pleasure


  • sailor ptolema
    June 19, 2008

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    awww, this is a beautifully sad piece....a tear jerker
    a lovely piece.
    I really like it.
    it's wonderful!
    and best of luck in the contest!!!!

    • onesugar gold member
      June 19, 2008
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      Thank you so much for reading

      Valued and appreciated

      ~sugar~


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 19, 2008

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    Stunningly-beautiful. Great imagery here. Wonderful poem. Very very tranquil piece indeed. Good luck in the contest Sugar.

    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx


    • onesugar gold member
      June 19, 2008
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      Thank you sweetie for your lovely comment.
      means a lot and is always pleasure.
      With Dark Love
      ~sugar~ xxx

  • twodie4
    June 19, 2008
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    simply beautiful
    td4

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