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Aint no love around here.

Did you ever have a day when you don’t want to roll of bed?
You feel like instead of being home you’re in hell instead.
All those nasty words they say keep ringing in your head.
You call up your best friend and say girl I can’t take their crap.
I feel like there is a big ol kick me sign on my back.
Can ya give me some advice to get me back on track?
Sure girl let me tell you what to say to them and they’ll never bother you again.

You say F you 
S**ew you
I don’t give a damn
Pi** off
Grow up
Be a real man.
Get a reality check before you talk to me.
And if you don’t I’ll show you how sorry you’ll be.
Cause there aint no love around here, when you say that s**t to me!

It’s 3 am.
They’re texting you again.
Saying girl, Baby, I’m sorry. I really really am
You let out a deep sigh and say “Here we go again.”
And you text them back saying:
You say F you 
S**ew you
I don’t give a damn
Pi** off
Grow up
Be a real man.
Get a reality check before you talk to me.
And if you don’t I’ll show you how sorry you’ll be.
Cause there aint no love around here, when you say that sh*t to me!
I said:
You say F you 
S**ew you
I don’t give a damn
Pi** off
Grow up
Be a real man.
Get a reality check before you talk to me.
And if you don’t I’ll show you how sorry you’ll be.
Cause there aint no love around here, when you say that sh*t to me!
And if you don’t I’ll show you
I’ll show you.
I’ll show you how sorry you’ll be…
Cause there aint no love around here, when you say that sh*t to me!
I say
There aint no love around here, when you say that shit to me!

Author notes

Ok yes I know this poem has some "Bad words" in it but I blocked them out.But they are used not to say oh my gosh Nikki used a bad word! They are used to express feelings and come on we all say bad words.
So just forget about the bad words and read the WHOLE poem.
Pretty much it's about what to say to people who really get under you skin.

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  • upperworld06
    March 17
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    haha i like it, the "bad words" seemed to bring it to life more. thanks for entering


  • Powered by Tofu
    June 22, 2008
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    ooops! 4got 2 applaud, sry.
    here u go


  • Powered by Tofu
    June 22, 2008

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    "bad word!"
    lol! nice poem nikki.
    u were in an angry mood, wern't you?
    very well expressed, it makes me wanna shout and yell.
    xoxo,
    --gooshawn <3