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Tears

Tears can express so much
they are a language of life and us.
From being sliced open to being
so happy and touched by kindness.
Tears can release the very soul
move the heart and reach others.

Tears are the pieces broken the
hungers and unheard voice bleeding.
Tears can release the deepest hurt
pierce the thoughts to flow crimson.
Tears can be painful and cause
the heart to shatter or just exist.

Tears can be the rain of life endured
or the sun light of hope once again.
Tears can bring a beginning or a end
of lost hope and the sense of self.
Or a chance of healing and journey in
happiness to a restoration of living.

Tears are the angels who would hold us
or the ones that still know when silent.
When we have lost ourselves a long
the way in the wings of what is love.
Tears are the heart which pours out
in the storm or blessings we've known.

Tears are a breakdown of so much
learning and growing from the paths.
Tears are the lessons the chances
we all must endure not being alone.
Tears are what we all need to feel
but hopefully together being as one.

By Sherry Finley

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  • kirbysman Moderators member
    July 11

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    Beautiful

    Wow, Sherry, I had never really stopped and thought about all the things tears can do but you're sure put it all down here. That's excellent. From one who's very sentimental and familiar with tears, this really sums it all up. Great job.

    Daddy Paul


    • Sherry gold member
      July 14
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      Thank you dearly...........

      Thank you for taking the time to read a few of mine. Means a lot and for your very kind comment. ♥♥
  • Wowzer.

    Sherry,
    You simply do not write enough. This shows amazing maturity in how you write, and the depth of feeling you have with words.

    It's lovely, and moving.

    -Mean Old Boy.


  • imahealer gold member
    July 8

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    BEAUTIFULLY VERSED!

    Tears are so very cleansing. To hold them back is to bring internal angst. You certainly have matured into a brilliant writer, and a beautiful woman! I love your blonde hair! I wanted to see if you were still writing, and voila! Here you are! I'm so happy to see your brilliant smile. Congratulations on the HM.


    • Sherry gold member
      July 8
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      Thank you so dearly much

      Linda, dearest thank you so much for your lovely and kind comment. Hope you are doing well still have my dollies you sent to me. Love, Me ♥

  • myrataal silver member
    June 24

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    Ah Sherry!

    Such a very beautiful write ... I am so glad I read this ... for you gave definition to growth brought about by the release of deepset feelings in cleansing our souls.

    Tears are the pearls caught in the urn of God, who turns it to Living Water.



    And ... one day there will be no need for tears anymore.

    Love, precious One.
    Myra


    • Sherry gold member
      June 24
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      Me loves you thank you :)

      Thank you for your beautiful comment its priceless because you are too me. ♥♥♥

  • pattyann4500
    June 22

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    This is beautiful. Some would not think of tears as inanimate objects, but they are. Just because they burst and dry up doesn't mean they aren't real. You have brought them to life and given me joy reading your poem. Thank you. Patricia


  • suseann
    June 21

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    They are indeed all you've expressed so well here. And more. Be they of sadness or overwelm of joy,they fill the soul to overflow spilling out and drowning those who feel simpatico in compassions. Nice work kiddo.


    • Sherry gold member
      June 23
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      Suseann, Thank you much, I updated my authors page and wrote something about you on it. (((((((((((((Big hugs to you)))))))))))
      The picture is recent of me and my bunny. Thank you for your kind words. ♥♥

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    June 18

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    excellent~

    You have indeed described tears perfectly
    An excellent poem sweet sis of mine
    Best of luck in the contest to
    I have up some new ones hope you come visit me too
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • Sherry gold member
      June 18
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      Thank you Susan for your kind comment and time to read me.

  • NurseyPoo
    June 18

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    touching

    You expressed so many feelings here. Your word usage was very good and I felt tears in my eyes from the beauty of your soul. Keep it up!


    • Sherry gold member
      June 18
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      Wow such a beautiful comment from you thank you dearly and for the three claps thats a high compliment coming from the Poo hehe.
      ♥♥♥
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