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I wonder

As I sit here in the cold and dark,
all alone in my cold dark thoughts,
I wonder I wonder.
Was it worth it thinking of reasons,
or should I just've told the truth?
Love makes people blind.
I wait for the light,
the light comes for me,
the darkness can do nothing now.
I wait and I wonder.
The light comes for me,
no hiding,no searching
As I wait for it, I wonder.

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  • Andi. gold member
    July 18

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    wonder no more.
    this is beautiful, even if it is a bit depressing
    ♥ Uni


  • hyper thing
    February 17
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    I like it


  • xXAlbertArcadeXx
    January 22
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    i feel kinda related to this one,specially the line :" Love makes people blind "


  • prncesstaylor93
    July 20, 2008
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    WOW REALLY DEEP FEELINGS.... ITS AWESOMELY GOOD


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 6, 2008

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    Wow, this is very powerful & alluring to the reader ! You write amazingly;; every word was so captivating and powerful. What a deep piece of poetry. Thanks for entering & best of luck to you ! ♥


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 6, 2008
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    Which option is thisss ? I'd very much like to read it


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 4, 2008

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    Great poem i liked it alot. Its worded very well. Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck

    ....

    Shelly

     


  • Second.Choice
    July 2, 2008

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    Oh wow I really like this poem! It has a great flow to it and it is so deep. Awesome poem! I love the way you kept repeating 'I wonder' fantastic, a great impact
    xx


  • SilverWolf
    June 27, 2008

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    wow!!! that is great!! really cool title! short and moving! great flow!! veryy deep! great nice write!!

    Wolf Loner


  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 21, 2008
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    ooh!

    short, sweet and impactful! good flow! deep and meaningful write!

    Keep writing


  • wall-e cake
    June 20, 2008
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    it very nice i like the way u do ur words but i little more flow but i like it good job


  • xX-Morephine-Xx
    June 19, 2008

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    Wonderful

    Im sure we all have moments where we wonder about everything, and are just unsure of ourselves.
    Very good write. Keep it up

    <3 ~(Chanted)~


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    Welcome to All Poetry

    the way you have written with such doubt and truth is amazing and so beautifullt represented with your words. it is a feeling that I am sure many can relate to and understand. writing out the emotions and confusions can really help to releave tention and pain. a wonderful write well done

    Charlotte
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  • queen Moderators member
    June 18, 2008

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    Welcome To All Poetry

    hi Emokid 123

    Always tell the truth, it will set you free like nothing else can This is a good poem well done
    Please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
    Site Greeter

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