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Tomorrow was not here



This morning when I came to you to sing
you fed me a bowl of stones

you did not watch as I chewed
cracking teeth

you were sitting on his knee
talking across me
to the others
reminiscing of places, people and songs you all knew
but I did not

I swallowed the stones
teeth fragments
and blood ;
made myself comfortable squatting on the floor
and smiled with all my might.

The hours passed and I could leave
waving boldly
although you had already turned away.

This afternoon
I darkened the room
covered my head with a blanket
and slept.

When I awoke I thought tomorrow was here
but it was not.


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  • XxrockxXxgirlxX
    June 20, 2008

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    Sad. Why did they feed them stones? I didn't really get that. I was assuming it was because the person was starving, but even if someone was starving would they eat stones? Or maybe I just didn't get the metaphor


  • HaleyMary
    June 19, 2008

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    Powerful write. Especially the ending. It made me think of people hoping for something more in life and waking up every day realizing that what they wish they had just isn't there. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • Nothing But No
    June 18, 2008

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    I am so happy you posted today, I missed reading your work. I've been in this situation before- many times actually. Thank you for writing this so I didn't have to.