My love for you is an eternal flame,
enchanted and burning forever,
My darkened soul belongs to you my queen,
I will light your way in darkness;
and save you from your demons,
I am your slave,
I love you forever.
Its impossible to breathe without you,
No matter how much i try, i just can't do it,
So till the end you will be forever in my heart,
And until the end of day; I will love you more than life.
Author notes
Wrote as a contest entry.
-Crosses fingers-
A contest entry
- Love poems, Letters, etc. by SaviDropKick.Oi..
375 points, ended July 14, 2008, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just tell me what you think
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whoo!
well done baby!!
you came second!!
my boy ish so amazing!!!
love you shmexi!!!
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awww!
i love this piece!!!..nice work alex!
*looks at Heartbroken Vampire*
No it was for me!..lmao!..love you alex!
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*growls at scarletXroses* it was written for me!!!!!
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i was kidding
and you waitied like almost a year to reply to that comment... -
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heeeehee!!
oops. that's a lil late!
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This is pretty! Awesome job Alex!
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AAAAAAAW! If u dun win i'm shooting every1 on ap!
*turns to the ap people*
THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR MEEEEEE!!!
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dark deep soul!
this was sure to make the heart glow.
May it reap to you all that you deserve!
ears/Seattle
way to write, i'm sure she must have glowed reading it!
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whoever this girl is shes lucky, wow. great job...loved it
~hina
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Awww, Lexi You're sure to win any girl's heart with this poem! You say I'm an amazing writer...well, I think your poems kick ass better than my own! You better win this contest or else Savi will be hearing from me XD
Love ya forever!!! 
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AWWWW
This is wonderful Alex. Keep up the good work. Always your friend Darcie
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very pretty <3
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wow hunni
this is amazing!! i love it!! now u have to write a poem for me.. i wrote u one a long time ago lol love ya xx
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this is beautiful my dark angel
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you will find love like this i know it
i love you -
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Wow this is Good
very well written
good job
xxx--<3--
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awwwwww Alex!!!!
u love me!!!!!!
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Very beautiful! It sounds like you really love her!
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