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Desire's Drops...

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Emerald greens golden drops

envelope me in love's embrace

 

Droplet's playful roll

slowly down my spine

touch me lovingly

beyond my soul

 

Astute perception

of my body's emotions

satiate fervor's of my desire. 

 

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  • jasminerose
    June 27, 2008

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    OH my, a lovely piece indeed! Gorgeous imagery written with a passionate pen!
    Thank you for this beautiful entry in my contest!!!
    Linda


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 19, 2008

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    wonderful, sensational, just two words i could think of, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • penman gold member
    June 18, 2008
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    Excellent

    A very beautiful creation. So touching and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    Lovely

    How beautiful your words flow,
    thanks for sharing them here my friend,
    and I'm blessed to be able to read them.
    All the best in the contest,
    your friend, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ x

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