hold on to the ground
as the world spins us round
with the color in your lips
your face is all there is
tis love that makes us sane
cause otherwise we're mad
I'll take you where we can dance
and where we're all alone
love makes us stable
and lets us feel the wind
lets us be a part of it
and free from the daily din
Stare
into
my
eyes
A contest entry
- Love poems, Letters, etc. by SaviDropKick.Oi..
375 points, ended July 14, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
only the second love poem ive ever written
Comments
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Sounds like it's you and me against the world time and love is the answer. You convey that feeling well.
Good luck with your piece.
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wow! i dont know what to say about this. WOW!
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awwwwwwwwwwww i loves this!!!!!!
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