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you broke my wings
now i cannot fly
no matter how hard i try

youve made me hate you
when all i wanted was your love
now i spit at your name
but this aint a fight with gloves

this is a battle for survival now
but all i wanted was compassion
but it was all just our body's attraction

now i stomp on your emotions
just to prove i can
i thought you were my prince
but i know now youre not that man

you will be the only one crying
because ive had enough
you will be the one thats screaming
theres no need to act tough

youll be the only one crying
when this day is done
and all because you went
you destroyed all my fun

you liar, you used me
and that i cant forgive
i hate you now, i truly do
for as long as i shall live

the things ive done for you
all the tears that i have shed
youve now killed my emotions
made them dead

i will never sing your praises
not now, not ever
because this new bound hatred for you
it will never quiver

you liar, you used me
and that i cant forgive
i hate you now, i really do
for as long as i shall live

my hearts has been shattered
way beyond repair
now i stand, boring and lifeless
without any love to spare

youve ruined my happy life
made it sad and mocking
youve left me stranded
with a hatred for you thats shocking

it gives me motivation
it makes me smile
when i recall you crying
with enough tears to fill the Nile

so when you lie in bed tonite
i hope you remember one thing:

youre a liar
you used me
now leave me alone
just let me be

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  • char13
    August 12
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    Hey girl, that's right, kick him in the ass! I hope you're feeling much better since it's been almost two mnoths since you wrote this poem... If not, always feel free to drop me a note- I'll join you in more male-bashing!(seriously, at 19, you'll look at the world through entirely different-older, wiser, more tired- eyes)
    Yeps, great poem here!