I saw you,
a glimpse of you
I saw you
in a dream of a dream..
The dream they saw
The dream they told,
All of them,
to me they spoke
The dream was actually
for me- Being told, retold..
I've begun to fathom this
Their dream was
my dream to be,
Their dream was
a signal for me,
The glimpse is
where I ought to be
Their dream is
my goal to reach
A vision- been brought in front
my face- for me to see
Unmistakably
I saw you,
a glimpse of you
I saw you
the glimpse of what I ought to be-
You will soon be me.
As I gradually
become you.
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A wise realization,
dream to reality,
phrased perfectly.
I particularly like the closing.
Well done!
Aesthete
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hey! thank you for visiting and being encouraging
I like the last line too..
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A Ms Me special.
(Thank you) I'm not sure we're able to fathom answers until there is nothing more we can remember (when it's to late). ---- I suspect you're the most stable hearted free spirit in you corner of the world. A dish. Thank you (again) ---- an image about balance --- http://www.au6.com/centre
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love the poem... but... i think it needs a better background ... love the line "in a dream of a dream"... but i think you can put it in a better way... rest is just amazing and suppose expresses a lot in quite simple words as possible...
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Thanks dear.. I'll try to find a better looking background for sure.. as for your fav statement unfortunately it's not mine.. had heard it from somewhere.. lets see if its still looking itsy bitsy, I'll edit it later.. thanks once again for your honest comment, much appreciated and welcomed Love~
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