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Hate

Hate is such a strong beautiful word.
I hate the way i let you in,
they way you talked
made me so calm.

I hate the way
you couldn't break up with
me over the phone.

I hate the fact you did it over
myspace.

I hate the way you
thought i would let you
be with her and me.

I hate the way you choose
her over me.

I hate the way your
voice now sounds
cause its killing me

I hate the way
you said you loved me.
An that you care.

I hate the way you
wanted to be with both
of us and think it was ok.

I hate the way that
your not mines,
anymore.

I hate the way you
make me want to sit
here and cry.

But most of all
I Hate that
your not mines

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  • adsaige
    June 19, 2008

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    i hate that you're not mine.

    god, if that doesn't make me think of a certain someone, than i don't know what does. it's so bittersweet, and it hurts that i know what it's about.


  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 18, 2008

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    Thsi is a really great poem, keep up the good woek, and thank you so much for entering my contest, ♥ Christina