jumping around digging holes
pumping gas to get to you
choked on reality
smashed my feet along the way
covered all your scars
smoked the last pack again
kicking and screaming,
you lied and broke the fall
dreamed and hoped all would be well
held your hand til the end of hell
swim across to only be told you failed
my heart now sits at the bottom of the ocean
Author notes
AiM I Am in AN
" i guess love is the real outlaw "
" you are my muse
got me smoking nicotine "
A contest entry
- Almost Anything Goes by righteousme.
900 points, ended June 29, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow!!! This poem is so beautiful and creative, astonishing and amazing. You did an excellent job with this one. Keep up the excellent work. Congratulations on the HM this poem deserved silver or gold though. I look forward to reading many more of yours. All if I ever get the time. God bless you always.
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wow... words are useless in times like these... added HM for you... thanks again...
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wow, this is a creative and yet thought provoking piece, i love the lines you have here that stinks in a person's head, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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thank you for always reading my work ihope all is well with you and life is treating you sweet take care Aaron
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wow... i loved this piece... pumping gas to get to you... great line... why didnt i think of it... haha... great take on the prompts.. thanks for your time and talent...
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