In all our sadness
as we bleed like hounds sent to slaughter,
we cackle and giggle
with pause for time to feed on cannibalistic flesh.
Dig the nails into skin
and howl for the sake of it.
Smell the scent of the post-mortem cum,
and lick it greedily off my inner thighs.
Resound the applause
in time with the moans of a wretched whore,
we dance and spin
without pause for the pains invoked by laughter.
Dig the nails into brothers skin
and screech for the sake of it.
Smell the scent of sisters post-mortem cum
and lick it greedily off her inner thighs.
A contest entry
- Anything you want...Show me Your Best Poems..I need inspiration..PW's Welcome! by Hetha.
2100 points, ended August 20, 2008, 159 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I don't even know what to think of this. Just... wow. Great writing.
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Thank you. It's wonderful to know that someone somewhere actually still reads one work, so truly thank you.
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No problem at all.
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Vivid imagery indeed. Disturbing imagery, but this is your poem. I won't pick on your choice of subject matter. I tend to look at more or less how it is written. I don't see any punctuation or grammatical errors, so on its own merit, it serves its purpose.
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wow i asked for dark not sexual im 13 and did not want to nor need to read that ovisly you are out of my contest
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I gave you dark, which you asked for, I gave you some of my best, which you also asked for, and you noted nothing of slight sexual content not being allowed.
And yes, it is only slight sexual content. This isn't purely based on sex, and there is very little of it.
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Very dark and disturbing.
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wow. its so... i cant even find a word. stomach churning? made me pull a face. The imagery was perfect. not a nice image but very vivid. excellent work
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