I take hold of her hand; it fits perfectly in mine
Pull her up towards me; “Let’s go for a walk”
We stroll along the beach, letting the warm water lap against our feet
She lets out a shriek as a larger wave crashes against her knees
I wrap my arm around her bare waist, thinking there is nothing better
Than walking through paradise with the one I love
The sand is hot against our feet, the sun warm and pleasant against our faces
The beach stretches on forever
We walk for what seems like hours; the number of people becomes sparse
My mind starts to wander as I gaze at her beautiful profile; hair blowing in the breeze
I feel myself harden, but I try to hide it
“Race you” I say, and I start to run
She follows, faster than I thought;
I look back at her, but trip over an invisible pile of sand
I fall, twisting to land on my back; my landing is made soft
She doesn’t have time to react, falls right on me
I grin at the success of my plan; she doesn’t seem to mind
She kisses my lips and asks if I’m alright
“It hurts, kiss it better” I reply
“Where does it hurt, my love?”
I point, and she laughs
She kisses my lips once again and sets to work, healing my wound
She massages my rod from outside my shorts
I have stopped smiling; I sigh in complete relaxation
I glance at her; she simply stares at the ecstasy shown on my face
She likes that look all too much; she craves more
She glances around; no one to be seen
Her hand reaches under the band of my shorts; grasps the hardness
My eyes roll back; God, I love when she does that
My heart is beating faster and faster; I’m holding my breath
The pleasure is pulsing through me
I know how good it can get
She pulls my shorts down past my waist; she wants better access
Her eyes drop down to the large treasure encased in her hand
Every time, it’s as if she has never seen it before
Funny how a simple look can excite me so much
She leans back up and looks me in the eye
Lets her sweet spot rub against my soldier standing tall
One deep kiss, her tongue down my throat,
That’s all it takes
I am desperate now, I need her lips around me
I push her shoulders back
She gives me that sultry, teasing smile and kisses my chest all the way down
Slowly, inch by inch; too slowly.
She finally gets there, wraps her hand back around me
While the other hand fondles my sensitive sack
The slow up and down mixed with the massage are enough to make me explode;
But no; I’ll hold it; I want this to last
Her head finally bows to the scepter; one gentle kiss on its head
I can’t take my eyes off her; this goddess, satisfying my need
Her brown hair falls in front of her face; she moves it all over one shoulder
My god, she is sexy.
Her kisses follow the length of the shaft; top to bottom, bottom to top
Her tongue does the same; licks and flicks, sending shocks of pleasure through my entire body
I try to calm myself, make it last
The task gets harder as she continues
Her gorgeous, full lips fold over the top; it looks so big in her small mouth
She presses down with her lips; holds it there as her tongue flicks against the pulsing
I am in heaven
She slides her head down, only a couple of inches; pulls back
Does this a few times, making me crave her more
I sit up a bit; there is only so much I can take
My fingers entangle in her hair, I pull her down
Further, further; she has no trouble getting it all
I feel myself against the back of her throat and hold it there
The pleasure is insurmountable
She pulls back for air, yet she knows what I want
I don’t need to guide her anymore; she comes right back
Up and down; slow at first, her tongue moving quickly along me
Pushes me all the way in, pulls me all the way out
Massaging my sack the whole time
I can’t take it anymore; I’m seeing stars
The pleasure begins to ache
“I’m going to cum” I tell her
Did she not hear me?
She goes faster, faster;
My snake disappears and reappears through her mouth
Magic
Her lips pull harder, her tongue flicks faster, she sucks forcefully
My heartbeat is so fast
My breaths come in short gasps
I writhe as I reach that peak
I explode; see nothing but shooting stars
My juice squirts back into her throat; she handles it like a pro
She swallows, more and more,
I can’t believe how much there is
It starts to trickle out of her mouth, down her chin
I pull out and shoot the last few ounces onto her beautiful chest
She simply smiles and wipes it away with her finger;
She licks that finger so sensually
I lay back as my heartbeat slows and my breathing returns to normal; my energy is spent
I see palm trees overhead framed against a blue sky; my goddess lies down beside me
As I enfold her in my arms, I realize I need nothing;
I am in paradise.
Author notes
Part 3 of 4...enjoy =)
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Comments
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Very sexy, and well written as well. Thanks for the entry.
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Thank you for the beautiful entry to my contest,
I really love this hot poem its so sensual and fun
My favorite part is
I see palm trees overhead framed against a blue sky; my goddess lies down beside me
As I enfold her in my arms, I realize I need nothing;
I am in paradise.
My rules say up to 60 lines this is a bit over, but it seems to flow nicely As always keep up the wonderful writing, ~ Amy
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Excellent imagery..very erotic full of heated bliss...thanks for entering our contest...
Novy & Brazos
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Is it possible to be furious and in a state of euphoria at the same time? Because that's how I feel after reading this. I can't take anymore suspense. Please finish.
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Been WAITING!
Hey I commented this before but it disappeared. Anyways I thought it was beautifully written, been WAITING for this! It starts off very playful and sensual and at a certain point you can only take so much before your true desires reveal itself:
"She slides her head down, only a couple of inches; pulls back
Does this a few times, making me crave her more
I sit up a bit; there is only so much I can take
My fingers entangle in her hair, I pull her down"
Beautiful language and I canNOT wait for the final part! 9/10 keep going! (FROM ONE POET TO ANOTHER) True paradise!

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