Standing underneath this dead night sky
Wandering helplessly, searching for you
The clouds enclose me
Im lost and cant be found
I walk alone, seemingly like a death march
The stars like bright pin points in the sky above
Death looms, covers like a thick fog
The sliver of the moon slowly fades into darkness
Talking to myself, reliving all the memories of you
Calling out to you- screaming your name
You died last night...left me here all alone
Im left to roam this empty field in search of you
Author notes
Candy clouds of lullaby
A contest entry
- Loss by MrsJones.
400 points, ended July 7, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Picture Prompt Contest by Hope Angel.
450 points, ended July 12, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wht do u think?
Comments
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Very emotional and I can relate. Nice imagary. Thanks for taking the time to enter and pen a wonderful piece.
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thank you, its was no trouble at all
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Very emotional piece of poetry. I like the Evanescence lyric in the authors notes. Thank you for submitting.
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thank you.
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Wow, this is so sad, it really is, such sadness in the words, but with such meaning...Brilliant as always..
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yea i aimed 4 sad lol glad i could convey it. thanks so much babe
xoxo
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