Walking hand in hand amongst fringed palm tree's
lovers serenaded by warm sultry summer breeze
Pausing within your silvery luminous light
promises linger the moment just right
Fingers lace pulling each other close
love flows as passions grow
Lips caress lips a kiss loving, tender and slow
beneath your iridescent pearly glow
as crystal spectators light up obsidian sky
lovers whisper in passion's sighs
Hearts entwined gently yearning
feelings soar high, passion burning
Dancing to oceans hypnotic beat
waves crest as bodies meet
upon a golden sandy shore
you're beauty held in mystical awe
As orb of wonder casts her luminescent eye
over two surrendering, caught on loves high tide
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
- Romance Picture Inspired by ennovy.
700 points, ended August 8, 2009, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful imagery, well done. Thanks for entering our contest, and good luck to you.
Novy & Brazos
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Such beautifully romantic images wandered within your words.
Best wishes in the contest ~sugar~
Love Margaret
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Hell, this is one hell of a piece of work. Wonderful writing here Sugar. The imagery just oozes out in every line. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
With
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
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Thank you sweetie, so glad you enjoyed this.
It's always a pleasure to read your lovely comments.
With Dark Love
~sugar~xx
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Nice!
Now, this is what I call a romantic evening. One of your best romantic poems yet, sis. Fine work.
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Thank you Jaime, glad you enjoyed it
~sugar~
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i loved this it was very passionate.
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Thank you so much for reading
truly appreciated
~sugar~
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I agree with everone else
There is some excellent lines in this poem. Some very good poetry in a very romantic poem. Visual imagery is strong; word choice creates the setting. One change, Line 10 could be change to: lovers whisper in passion's sighs or lovers whisper passionate sighs
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Thank you for your advice Greg.
It has been altered.
Appreciate and value your comment
Luv ~sweetness~ xx
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IF THIS IS WHAT I HAVE BEEN MISSING WHILE I WAS WORKIN - I AINT A WORKIN NO MORE!
Hearts entwined gently yearning
feelings soar high, passion burning
Yet, another sweet and sensual piece - and the poem wasn't bad either! HE! HE! Yes, the lovely lady who wrote and the poem that she wrote as well - are equally sweet, sultry, and sensual! Now that I've gotten that out of the way I will say GOOD LUCK in this contest with this beautiful piece and Thank You SO MUCH for sharing in with me! What time did you say TEA was, Baby? HE! HE!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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You charmer LOL!!!
Thank sweetie for yet another lovely comment from your
sweet self. As always valued and appreciated.
Love ~sugar~ xxx
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'Dancing to oceans hypnotic beat
waves crest as bodies meet
upon a golden sandy shore
you're beauty held in mystical awe;
A Lover's dance under the moon. Crashing waves of emotional tides as two become one...under the heavenly stars! Love this poem. Full of so many images.
Goodluck in this contest. ~Sie
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment
truly appreciated
~sugar~
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Beautiful
The softness within your words that blend love and nature at its very best
Good luck in the contest hun
Julie
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Thank you hun, for your lovely comment.
Tis a pleasure to have you read.
~sugar~
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Beautiful
This is a beautiful write here and I wish I could have such an evening with a full moon shinning such a heavenly glow
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Thank you so much
I was just thinking exactly the same thing
~sugar~
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