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Maybe my eyes don’t tears
Maybe it will in some years 
Maybe it won’t ever

But something is shit
This life
This Shitty single life

If it was twice,
I will quit
With a quick exit,
And wait for the next life,

If it was like water,
I will flow back to the ocean
And start again,
But its like fire
And hot as hell
Lonely in it like a desert’s well

My mind is a roundabout,
Thoughts comes in and out,
I it was busy yesterday,
did not sleep last night, 
and here i start again
oh shit its full, my brain

Click clack
the clock clicked
back to the real world
into this life
This shitty life
This shitty shitty  life






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  • Passive
    June 18
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    Good poem, though the first line kind of bugs me. The rest is good, especially the fourth stanza