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Applaud
Why can't I clap
for my own poetry
I wrote it after all didn't I?
Unfair!

A contest entry

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  • ckwriter69
    June 20, 2008

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    Haha, very funny. Yes you should be able to clap for your own poetry, stand up and do it. Nicely written cinquain, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


  • waydownuponjoy
    June 20, 2008

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    Let's see if

    I can help you out with the clappies for your cinquain!

    joy


  • gaze
    June 19, 2008

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    LOL, yes! I agree with you, we should be able to pat on our own back! Don't they say 'love yourself so other can love you too'? We should be the ones to give the good example.
    This is fun and I bet almost everyone agrees with you, even though they will never admit.


  • Malabu
    June 19, 2008
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    hey what should we do....what if your poem sucked...should we give you applause and tell you what a great poet you are? and you believing that...keep writing lousy poems? LOL
    yeah...shame on that yam man for inducing us to write good cinquain....


  • Yemassee gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    LOL, Very Yemish! A lot of things have changed here since you frequented the halls. Some better, some worse.

    You are preaching to the choir because just look at this comment of mine, it's brilliant and if any comment deserves an applause it is this one!

    It's very unfair but I'll appluad your poem in a second and that will sort of even it up...hey, I bet you actually tried to applaud your cinquain! I know I've tried before.

    And Hi!!!!!!!!!!

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