Moonbeams so soft and smooth churn subtle sway
as gentle waves temper with softest rain
producing hues which never lead astray
as foundations of morn restore again.
Stepped to scene where sun shares with sky lunar
clear shadow to timepiece becomes tuner
as melted away are all disguises
in what perfect lathered light comprises.
Beyond sensationalized breath gained air
colored water to new ocean rises
and along its shore our love is felt there
as other existence plain resizes.
Author notes
I love you.
A contest entry
- Whatever You May Desire by InMyFlames.
600 points, ended July 9, 2008, 31 entries
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Comments
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i like the imagery you have put in this, its a great piece and very original well done and thanks for entering
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no, actually, I really like the title..I was just thinking that...how I like the title of this piece
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this has some really beautiful imagery...and nice rhyme..a very pretty love poem, Mark
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Thank you. Is the title too much? One of those things that came to me without any real thought.
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There can be NO disguises in the throes of passion - that is when one is at his/her weakest and most vulnerable
Your last stanza brought it all together nicely! The world stops when lovers are together and everything in shambles when apart - lovely my friend, pure brilliance here!
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