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Searching

Drifting along

upon aimless waves,

I am searching for the current

to guide me home.

 

The vision is clear,

yet undercurrents of sway

tug at my ambition,

to rock this fledgling soul.

 

One touch from divinity

and the ocean of eternity is mine.

 

Dawn rises softly

on the horizon

and through calmed waters

I am drawn to paradise.

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Prompt - Sea Of Dreams

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  • marlene47 silver member
    June 30, 2008
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    I liked the searching for home's current upon aimless waves, the swaying undercurrents, tugging and rocking, but feeling the touch of divine eternity you see the dawn of paradise on calm waters.
    Gently lapping write of finding your compass.
    Congratulations on the HM.
    Marlene


  • DolphinLass silver member
    June 18, 2008
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    wow great write good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    So refreshing and uplifting! To be calmed of our anxieties is indeed paradise!

    Wonderful write on the prompt!