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Baby, what happened?

It's deep
how you can be so shallow
~*~*~**~*~*~*~**~**~
Classical Depression,
Post traumatic Stress disorder,
directional mood disorder..
I guess we can throw in
Codependency as well.

Perhaps a dash of insomnia,
and a pinch of disassociation-
Boy, we better work on this one quick,
before she looses it.

"Turn me off and Tune me out,
Change me anyway you please."

Topsy Turvy,
Add Serataline to the mix,
and  suddenly not feeling
turns into being pissed off, all the time.
So let's sedate her.

Abilify once a day,
keeps her from being over the top.
Oh. Passing out?
Drop the dosage, up the other.

"Baby, What's happening?
Why can't you just stop?"

Stop, like flicking off a switch?
Your crazy. Not me.
Just pass another pill-
it'll make me seem sane.

((Darling, we only have your best interest in mind))

Author notes

It's a recipe.
Treat with caution, as it tends to explode.
Meh.

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  • BarbedWireButterfly
    July 8, 2008

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    An interesting concept on the ideas of insanity and depression portrayed quiet nicely. The structure and idea you used to create this poem is quiet unique and interesting. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 18, 2008

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    Great poem, keep up the good work.Thanks for entering my contest and good luck,
    ♥ Christina