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Fly Baby

Try not to think about those feelings of your worth;
just who would carry you to term and give birth?
I'm not trying to work out some long term scenario:
Does God breathe souls into the cells of an embryo?
And all this time I'm thinking:
You should work it out,
'cause I can't work it out.


Let's face it all our sorrows,
all of our tears,
are really questions of our deepest of fears;
I'm not saying sometimes we can't think to get by,
I just know that most times we're believing a lie.
And all of us have to die.  
No sense asking why.


Into this world we're born,
Sinners from the get go,
Shackled in wickedness,
Slaves to Death and Sorrow.
If you're never born
Into this world of Sin,
Then Sin just can't begin
To get a hold and enter in!


Fly Baby, fly!
And if you have died, fly to the Son.
You were never in control;
It's rigamarole:
I know, baby, you were a pure soul.

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Option 6. Name: hawaiiansolt/nakedadam

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 18, 2008

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    thank you for entering this contest. there are one or two spelling errors that you could fix. they are not too drastic but would look better if you did. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. i wish you the best of luck in this contest. viyanna rosemarie *ROSE*

    ps--thank you for being one of the few who have followed the rules in this contest.


    • twaintwine
      June 19, 2008
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      Fixed scenario, but left rigamarole, as it is an alternate spelling of rigmarole, and how my family says it. Thanks for the prompt feedback! Aloha, friend!


  • twaintwine
    June 18, 2008
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    Abortion Kills

    We never cease to define the depths of our depravity. I put it to music at www.nakedadam.net
    Check it out!