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I love you but it sucks

Woke up this morning
This is the one thing I feel
I can't remember if it was a dream
But I know that it is real

I love you

And I can't hide it
The truth has to come out
Even through a crappy poem
Which you can show
Which you can shout

I love you

Dearly
But I don't know what it means
Going to sleep not feeling a thing
Waking up with these wings

This move in feeling
I can not explain
It's the adding of love
The removal of pain

This poem
Through it all
I gain nothing

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