Hovering with too much uncertainty,
This time is slipping right through my hands.
Driving me to perfect insanity,
My joy and happiness is bleak and bland.
Over the edge, falling down through the air;
Before my eyes bittersweet memories flash.
As I near the end, my death so fair,
My world is trapped in this violent clash.
Hatred enclosed spewing itself at them
To make them feel what I have felt so long:
Forced in the water when they know you can't swim.
Life's so sad, cheerful sounds the saddest song.
In this world, this life, I am just a stain;
Release me from this betrayal and pain.
A contest entry
- Raw Emotion by loving.a.soldier.
600 points, ended June 27, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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"i am just a stain" Powerful Line! This is a great piece! enjoyable read
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Nicely put!! The emotion was there and I love the flow of the poem! Great write! Keep it up! Good luck and thank you for entering
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