On soured fields
Pale faced moon
illuminates
Mans war
on nature
Emptiness betraying
.........Who's won?
Author notes
Artist credit;PHOTOBUCKET
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XVII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Fields of Emotions
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown a howling wolf...but for some reason getting reference to Vampirism- I was hearing word: Vampire- and also Clan- what sounds like word: Montebello-
Now wild as it sounds, after reading again I was being shown a bloodletting- however hearing word: informed- not safe Trust in Logic- phrase
Also seeing a male in coffin- hearing word: undead-
for some reason getting reference to mortician and embalming and strange but getting word: Uncle- and then a name: Bruce
whether uncle figure or like an uncle but for some reason being shown that word-
Hopefully that makes some sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Mans war on nature
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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gr8 job my guardian angel! i love how verylittle words speak to me!
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