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Love

Let Our Voices Endure
To hold hands as friends
Together until the end

Two become as one
Not to be led a stray
To sing our song each day

Living past our looks
To hear truth in our words
Have our wishes inferred

To not look back
Forever growing
Forward going

We both look down
After our taste of death
Knowing that, we’ve done our best.

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by jogn: With love!

Is it only wishful thinking

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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    this is rhymed. In the rules it states free verse poems. sorry, I'm going to have to remove it.

    thanks for entering, anyways.


  • klassy lassy
    June 24, 2008

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    ...and so it is as love endures... it becomes a treasure to take along, and sustains us in our journey, often prods us to move forward.


  • Spiritual Soul gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    This was beautiful. Love the words you chose! Good luck in the contest, and thank you for your comment on my piece
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • NyxianaSpades
    June 20, 2008
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    Very pretty I love the way you put it together ^^


  • Princess-of-Chance
    June 18, 2008
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    ahh its such a pretty poem! great job!

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