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Broken Pixie

I used to fly
With my beautiful wings
Untill my heart started to fall
It weighed me down to where i crashed
And now i am dead
With boken wings
And a broken heart
Broken everything
This is me
The Broken Pixie

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  • Justin
    June 19, 2008

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    You typed "untill," but I think you meant "until." Grrr... typos!

    You also wrote "boken" instead of "broken."

    Anyway, this was still a great write... just trying to make it even better welcome to all poetry!


  • SpiritDarkmaiden
    June 18, 2008

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    WoW I love the title "Broken Pixie", it's an attention grabber. I love this piece, it's so emotional and true and..broken lol. Great write.

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