wake me from this spell
this daydream awry
i have many thoughts to share
lately has seemed hopesless
confused always
feeling completely opposite from perfect
in this dream it's back and forth
from good to nightmares
something good has come out of all of this.
i've got a new breath of air.
it's very refeshing from despair.
i move along and try
try to let myself live
stop looking at what's not ready
and to things that are right there.
i'm trying somthing new
it's called being happy.
so maybe don't wake me..
because it's just getting good
A contest entry
- Give me what you've got by Sound of Madness.
450 points, ended June 30, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you much luck.
I can relate to this quite well.

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This one's good.
This describes a similar stage that my life is in presently.
Good luck in the contest. -
hey love this piece. what a gr8 write!

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WoW, what a pretty piece. I loved this poem. Great write.
Bloody wishes
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thanks. i appreciate that.
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