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Balance

God and Satan high above
God and Satan down below
We are many I am one.
I am your lord I am God.
I am your nemesis a god in my own right.
I am the creator of life.
I am the destroyer of souls.
I can give you eternal peace.
I can give you eternal torment
We are many I am one
I AM

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 20, 2008

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    The thought concieved in this work is quite creatively stated..I love this piece..thanks for the entry in my contest....


  • rainyday woman silver member
    June 18, 2008

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    The many faces of the one I like the concept, a very good piece. Welcome to AP, and good luck in this contest.
    Cheryl


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 18, 2008
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    Oh my goodness

    This has such depth and you have penned this very well


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    June 18, 2008

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    ooh this is really good,
    i like the way you described the poem in little words,
    but they mean so much, all my love,
    kitty, best of luck in the contest,


  • patsoldcat
    June 18, 2008
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    great

    i like this controversial i must say but a great write.

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