You are the music of my soul
the beating of my heart
Please know we will never fall apart
Author notes
best i could do in twenty words.
Sorry it is supr cheesy
A contest entry
- Make me fall in love with you with 20 words, If you can (Quickie) by McRae by nature.
1200 points, ended June 19, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice!!! I like the last bit of rhyme you threw in there. This was very beautiful. Thank you.
Much Love
Carrie


