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The word Love

Love, the word always sends butterflies squirming in my stomach,
I can't help it, i always think of him when someone says it,
He is so beautiful, with his baby blue eyes,
Whenever i see him it makes me wanna cry,
I don't know what i did to deserve him,
Whatever i did, well, I'm happy i did it,
He's amazing down to every little detail,
I look at him and my breath just comes to a still,
I love to be held by him, to be in circled in his arms,
To be kissed by him, He has a never-ending charm,
I'll love him till the day i die,
And i will never stop staring into his eyes,
And every night before i go to sleep,
I'll tell him " I love you." and then I'll drift off into sleep.

Could you sit through this poem?

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  • hide-n-go-seek-hope
    August 22, 2008
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    awwwweh.
    this is cute.
    :]

  • Kabs
    June 18, 2008

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    Aww, that's kinda cute. This poem is going to be viewed in completely different ways, but still have the same overall effect. The flow of words intertwine with the emotion really well.