crying, dieing, trying, hiding.
why do i keep fighting?
my heart belongs to you,
can you ever love me too?
i try too hard for your hand,
you're the only thought helping me stand.
will i ever face the truth?
or keep making up a silly excuse?
i need your love. i need your smile.
i need all of you, to go that extra mile.
will you ever let me in your heart?
will we ever be together, not apart?
too many questions, so little time.
i just want this us to be alright.
still, i wish for an end.
and wish that i could just start over again.
with your hand in mine,
wouldnt that just be fine?
but never, you wont even look me in the eye.
maybe i'll just waste away and die.
will you regret this all then?
will you please, just let this end?
A contest entry
- Make me feel it by Dovina.
450 points, ended July 1, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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A very heartfelt piece, trying to get someone you love to love you back, but when that doesn't happen, you just want to be wiped off the planet. I wish it were that easy. Thanks and good luck in my contest
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Wanting things to end, is always easier said than done. One letting someone in their heart is also hard to do, if that heart has been hurt or betrayed. I speak from personal experience. I feel everything you say in this poem. Great write.
R.C.
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