Make me believe you love me even if it isn't true
Because I couldn't bear the thought of ever leaving you
We all have to sleep in the beds that we've unmade
Lie here with me and be my sweet charade
Tell me the lies that you know I need
Author notes
love the prompt! just a little note. in the title of your contest it says 30-40 words but in your rules it says 30-50 i chose 50 i hope thats ok.
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 to 40 words by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended June 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i like this one
its very well done indeed
glad you went with the 50
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thanx for tha applause and i'm glad you liked it
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Goo Goo Dolls? You stole my idea! Thief! jk, but this is powerful, and it really has feeling and emotion to it (even if you weren't trying to put it in)
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