The blackness surrounds me,
like a dark suffocating blanket.
Its just like the dreams,
I had so long ago.
Checking the halls,
I make sure the coast is clear.
Then I grab the sharp razor,
that makes everything clear.
It slowly peels away my skin,
bringing a wave of red,
splashing onto the floor.
The darkness surrounds,
until a hear the key.
I realize I am caught,
in my deadly game.
I slash a large gash,
deep into my flesh,
a smile on my lips
as I slip to the floor.
Everything gets hazy,
and soon I hear a scream.
The darkness surrounds me,
reminding me of my dreams.
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Comments
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This poem was nicely written. The flow and imagery were very good.
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wow i love this!!
it really captured the emotion! -
Wow, this drew me in. Great imagery and flow.
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