red lips
i could say ruby
i could say crimson
i could even venture as far as to say magenta
but no,
she has red lips
simple and eloquent
pouting like a china doll sitting on a shelf
never knowing
what wonders lie beyond the shop window
Author notes
it's what the title made me think of i know it's a little out there
A contest entry
- Different Type Of Quickie by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended June 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this! An elogant little china doll
Best of luck!
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Titles inspire people in many different ways. Just because your poem is not what most people would think from the title does not mean anything. One thing though capitalize your I's
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