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True Love

I knock on your door at 10 pm.

i keep telling myself that i need to say i love him.

You answer the door,

And i can't find my words anymore.

I walk in and follow you,

the silence still grew.

But you stop short in the hall,

and give it your all.

Your lips upon my own,

the sweet sent of your cologne.

I'm lost in the moment of passion.

only for you i show my compassion.

We then end up in your room,

every moment of it i consume.

You gently lay me on your bed,

and only for your love i pled.

You slowly remove my clothes,

Whispering into my neck your oaths.

You caress me from my neck to my thigh,

and can hear the occasional sigh.

Lying naked beneathe you,

has never felt so true.

I silently kiss your chest,

as your hands grope my breast.

You look at me with hazel eyes,

ready for my heating cries.

I match your every move,

hoping that you approve.

Our breathing grows stronger,

we won't go for much longer.

And then your answering cries,

meeting my sighs,

you lay down beside me,

and the both of us agree.

You turn to me and stare,

You eyes those endless stairs.

'You are so beautiful,' You said,

as we lay there in your bed.

I smile and blush,

Such a silly crush.

Then your phone rings,

her ringtone it sings.

You reache over me to answer,

I'd rather have cancer.

It is your girlfriend,

but of course now it ends.

You tell her your tired,

my one true desire...

'I love you," you say,

and i'm glad it goes that way.

But you and i both know,

We cannot continue this show.

'I don't want to lose my best friend,' you said,

taking the words out of my head.

I curl up in your arms,

feeling safe from harm.

'And i don't want to lose my true love.

You are my missing dove.'

We fall asleep,

my heart he keeps.

But this memory is only one,

not to be repeated but now done.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

well, this is my first erotic poem... though it doesnt really go into detail. this is kinda true, minus the sex... but add more kissing. lol. and my favorite animal is a dolphin...

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  • Pretty Britty
    June 20, 2008
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    Uh huh.
    Right.
    Explain this to me now.


  • Chrysalis
    June 19, 2008

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    Kinda semi-erotic, but it's better though... not that vulgar or anything just really sweet in a way. Congrats with the green trophies you are sure deserving of them.
    Liked it overall... story was not that bad as well.

    have a blessed day and thanks for the comment.
    -Blanche


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 18, 2008

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    wow i love this poem-- if only i had someone like that..Very well written i love this story you wrote also
    =]]]] good job and thanks for entering my contest
    i wish you the best of luck

    xxx--<3--
    Shelly


  • Cerbie20
    June 18, 2008

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    this is a good poem. it's amazing what love can do to you... bring you together, but then tear you apart, and that's what hurts the most. good job!


  • Razor-Blade Romance
    June 18, 2008

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    This poem symbolises the natural human feelings for another person. I really like the use of love and emotion wording demonstrated within this write. I honestly feel that this poem demonstrates true love.
    Well Done !

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