I gave you everything
I showed you everything
I never wanted, anything
but you,
and its tearin me apart
i need a new start
Your wear your heart
in your jeans.
i know what it means.
I'm sick of fightin
for what you can't perceive
of love,
you don't believe
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What do you want?
How much was enough?
What do you want?
I never thought you could be so tough
What do you want?
So cold, so rigid, so untrue
What do you want?
cuz baby, I'm leavin you
-----------------------------------------------------(chorus end)
(solo).....
I'm leavin today
so outa my way.
You had your chance,
your chance to play.
Captured my heart
you need to depart,
it's true an baby,
I'm done with you.
You walked away,
when I needed you most
Left me alone an scared,... so scared
but I survived!
without you
an I wont let you
hurt me again.
-----------------------------------------------------(chorus start)
What do you want?
How much was enough?
What do you want?
I never thought you could be so tough
What do you want?
So cold, so rigid, so untrue
What do you want?
cuz baby, I'm over you
-----------------------------------------------------(chorus end)
-----------------------------------------------------(repeat chorus)
Author notes
i wrote this to be like dark hardcore/screamo i hope you like it
A contest entry
- Music To My Ears by Brandan Shamaya.
600 points, ended July 22, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great as always! keep up the good writing!
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very nice, thanks for entering
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Well you did good for your first try, but there are a few corrections. . .I will send them to you later. . .I have to get ready for work
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gr8 writing liza! keep up the good work! i luv it
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this has to be one of the best songs that i have read. its really good! and i can relate to it so much. but then again, what person cant? i think it happens to everyone at least once. i like the chorus a lot too. and my guy wore his heart in his jeans... or if you look at this way, thought with the wrong head. good job. i love it!
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