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Id Come Back To You....

Here I sit watching you,
You can't see me anymore.
I catch your smile
ever time you look at me.
I wish you had an idea,
of how much i care for you.
But here you leave and run
I'm still here when you come back.
Just say Im importnant
and that you need me
because when you go
I DO miss you
but what about when Im gone
Where are you now?
I know where I am
So when you need me
Ill come back for you
even thought it feels,
I'd have to be gone for you to love me.

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I miss him more than words can say and sometimes I just wish he'd understand how I feel for him. I want himto want me like I do him. I sometimes just don't understand!

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  • AliceInTheRealWorld
    June 17, 2008
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    It's a good poem, you might need to check the grammar as I think you mean every in the beginning and I'd and I'm have hyphens,
    I like the emphasis and the emotion so bluntly put. The last line isn't alone felt, and the spacing works well in final result. Good job!