I didn't want to do it
Tried to run away, you let me catch you trying
To make a hide-away
I shouldn't have said it, I know that it was wrong
I will deny it
My whole life long
I think that you were playing, having a ball
My feelings were written
All over the wall
You didn't apoligize, said you never would
I didn't want to do it
Didn't know I could
Now it's almost over, I'll be on my way
I won't think about you
Until later today
I didn't mean to do it, now what to do
I didn't mean to fall
So much in love with you
Author notes
Prompt: #2 I fell in love with you
A contest entry
- Something To Divert Me (pre-writes allowed) by piccola.
700 points, ended June 27, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF forward contest of Rifkins I won gold! by Topaze.
1000 points, ended July 1, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
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What do you Think???
Comments
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Since he did not take the time to apologize, let me apologize on his behalf, dear, I am sorry, may I find solace within your grace, I think it is a beautiful piece, and I like it very much. I think most people are afraid to let them their prides, on the other hand, I mind not, for by doing so, it reflects God's love within us all. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing
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The entrie are supposed to be 20 words only. This is a great poem though.
Much Love
Carrie
I will Judge this tonight
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its only 20 words yo.
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