Beyond the waves where
you kiss my fear to quiet
I'm unclothed, bare
to the fabric of truth,
draped
in discovery of self,
that colors you deep
in my eyes ~
Author notes
A contest entry for: PIF-Prompt - 30words -
PROMPT: 'Everytime I close my eyes
I see you and I know now, who I am'
(Newton Faulkner - Dream Catch Me)
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- PIF-Prompt - 15 entries-30words-Reserve and write! by Cannonsfire.
850 points, ended June 18, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Wonderful extended cloth imagery.
Careful word choice really makes the words drip from the page.
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I adore the metaphor in this. This piece is beautifully written and well maintained. great job1
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A beautiful write and presentation. Heartfelt. Lovely metaphor. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Excellent closing lines. Well penned. Best wishes in the contest.
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Loved the ending. Simply beautiful stuff here.
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Gorgeous! C
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