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July

Missing image

Blue skies

frame the blistering sun

on this hottest month

of joyful fun.

 

When the garden smiles

are pink and blue

with a background color

of lavender hues.

 

We'll light the barbecue

and celebrate

the birthday of

the united states.

 

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  • perfectsunset
    June 30

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    Aww this was sweet and simple. Loved your imagery and rhyme and how you took this prompt as the birth of the united states. Very originally crafted. Well done!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    June 22
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    Absolutely Maahvahlous!!!


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 17

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    I want to move into that house and have you write me awesome words like this.
    Thank you for sharing this.


  • perfectsunset
    June 17
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    July**

    Best of luck!